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I walked outside into the cold air after saying goodbye to my parents.
Your Momma's Girl: They were sending her away to the Happy Home
Sexy Beast: Where life is beautiful all the time.
Today was going to be another boring day at school.
SB: Boring, eh? I'll show you boring! Hey Heather! Come here, let
me make you stand in the middle of an empty room and poke you with a stick.
YMG: And it's only the second sentence.
At least I would be able to see my friends there.
ALL: SHE HAS FRIENDS?!?
As I waited for the bus to come I thought about how it would be cool if the real Legolas were there on the bus waiting with a seat for me.
Maymortenlawsen: Ready to shoot you with his handy-dandy bow and
arrow!
Of course I knew that couldn't happen, and as usual the bus would be late. While thinking about how this would never happen,
YMG: Wait - how the bus would never be late? I'm confused by poor
grammar!
SB: *pats YMG*
I noticed a movement from the within the woods.
SB: Your boyfriend's cheating on you in the bushes
AGAIN?
TD: If a Legolas is moving in the bushes, and there's no one around,
does anybody care?
YMG: No.
I stared and thought only of it as a deer, for they have increased in number lately.
MMLS: Because that's totally relevant.
I turned away as I heard the bus coming and thought of the movement no more.
YMG: No more, sweet Hamlet! No more!
I waved to my dad, got on the bus, and sat with Sarah. Little did I know that would be the last she saw of her home for quite a while.
SB: And then she ran away to join the circus.
I shifted in my seat, for I felt that I was still being watched.
SB: It's the Patriot Act! They're always watching!
YMG: It turned out that Sarah had an eye in the back of her head
…
I glanced over at Sarah. No, she wasn't watching me.
YMG: Nah, her third eye was patched up alright.
I looked around quickly. I didn't see anyone watching me. Still, I had that feeling, and that feeling wouldn't go away.
SB: The feeling that you're the Pink Elephant in the middle of the
room that "isn't" there, and that "nobody" is looking at.
YMG: It's the invisible man! It's the invisible man! Incredible how
you can, see right through me …
When we reached the school we got off the bus. I walked with Sarah until once inside the school.
YMG: And then I ran off to buy opium.
SB: So that's why her grammar's so abysmal.
YMG: And she had no other friends.
Then I climbed up the stairs, every couple of minutes making sure no one was behind me.
Biggertaylorbodstaff: That's a damn long stairway. Maybe it's the
Stairway to Heaven.
YMG: Or Hell.
At the top of the stairs I walked in to the hallway to my locker. I turned the dial carefully to the first number of my combinatio, 19. Then past the zero to 39, then to 37.
YMG: Thanks for the extraneous information. We really needed it to
progress with the story.
I pulled the locker open and put the books from my book bag into my locker. Then I took all of the books I needed for my first periods which included Spanish, English, Home Ec, Music, and Science. Then I walked to Spanish.
SB: This sounds like my Junior High schedule. HA! aHAh! She IS in
Junior High!
YMG: Is this an attempt to show off how smart the character is? Cos
it's not working.
When lunch came I quikly walked over to Sinead and Katty.
YMG: Sinead O'Connor? (Lunch came? Ewww ….)
" Hi Sinead, hi Katty!" I greeted them."
" Hi, Heather!" they said in chorus. As loyal friends they seemed to know
something was wrong.
YMG: Did you ever see that movie Heathers where Winona and Christian
Slater go on a killing rampage? That would sure make this story more interesting
right about now …
While Sinead went to the lunch line to get her lunch Katty asked me,
" Heather, what's wrong? Are you ok?" I wanted to tell her so I did.
SB: And yes, I said yes, I said yes.
" Well, I feel like someone's benn watching ever since I got on the bus
this morning,"
" Like somene's stalking you?" inquired Katty.
SB: Like the Clock? LIKE JAKE?
BTBS: NEVER MENTION THAT NAME EVER AGAIN!
YMG: Meanwhile, we take you back to the thousand wandering eyes, furtively
watching everyone …
" No.it's not like someone's stalking me. It just feels like someone's watching me from a distance.
YMG: Naw, he's not stalking me, he's just, uh, you know, following
me with a sharp pointy knife.
There have been threats yet, so it's not really stalking. Do you see any
one watching me?" I asked Katty. She looked around, and then to my fright,
told me that she had seen someone staring at me.
" He doen't look like he's around here," she said.
TD: She just said she had seen him! But he's not around there!
YMG: (as Katty) He looked like that Legolas guy, you know,
from Lord of the Rings?
"Oh, what does he look like?" I said terrefied that someone was following and watching me.
YMG: Why doesn't she LOOK at him?
TD: He's not around there!
She replied, " I only saw his face because he saw me staring at him. His face was fair, and he was very focused. His eyes were undescribable.
YMG: (as Katty) He had these incredibly blue eyes, and this
great blond hair, *just* like the life-sized Legolas cut out I have in my
room. You know, the one I make out with all night long?
TD: Undescribable? That's unpossible!
I wonder where I have seen him before?" wondered Katty.
SB: Wait, was he that guy, from the party, that shagged--
MMLS: Hush, keep it clean.
SB: This is a fanfiction. It's way past being clean.
Sinead came back lookng starved.
SB: Damn these teenagers and their eating disorders!
She told us that she had to charge her lunch and that the lunch line was going slow. Even though I heard her I was thinking about the yung man that was watching me.
SB: *WRITING MECHANICS ALARM*
Who was he?
YMG: He's just a sweet transvestite … from transsexual … Mirkwood.
Katty's voice ran over and over in my head.
MMLS: Faster and faster!
YMG: Harder, harder!
Each time the curiosity in me grew.
BTBS: Bigger and bigger!
SB: Just like his elfhood!
Should I be frightened? Is he going to kill me? The thoughts ran through me.
SB: Like a burning stake into a vampire's heart.
YMG: … hesitation runs right through my head, the alphabet runs right
from A to Zed …
I decide that I best try to avoid being alone, just incase the young man did want to kill me.
YMG: Just a little harmless DEATTTTHHHHHH. You know, I think Katty
forgot to mention a key significant detail about the so-called stalker. Like
a hockey mask. Or a bow.
SB: I like how she goes from "I think maybe someone is watching me"
to "OMG A murderer!"
YMG: A ... morderer!
After my last class I walked to my bus. The bus driver told me that my parents wanted me to go to a nearby inn because they had gone to the doctors and wouldn't be home until the next day.
YMG: Because by "doctors" they meant dealers, and by "the next day"
they meant never.
TD: Why would they tell the bus driver? Shouldn't they tell
the principal or teachers, or something?
YMG: Yeah, it's not like she couldn't have spent the night at a friend's
house.
SB: Why are BOTH her parents going to the doctors?
YMG: "Doctors."
SB: Right.
My parents had already paid for my stay. The bus driver also told me that he would drop me off at the inn. The ride was short, yet it seemed so long to me because I didn't know what was going to happen to me.
SB: And then the bus driver said that he needed to follow me up to
the room and throw me on the bed and shag me senseless and then I woke up.
YMG: Take me, take me! Wait - you're not Legolas!